Talk:Doctor Who Adventures/The Evil Healer

Segment 1 - Review
That was probably the best piece of work on here that I have ever read. It had it all! There was a great story line, in which the Doctor seems to have become evil; interesting characters that have been described to the maximum; an amazing setting that you have also used imagery on to create an amazing atmosphere and a well written, organised layout! My favourite part was probably when the Doctor seemed to be turning bad and when he left his companions stranded (I hope to find out what happened to them later). I thought the description on this story was amazing and I hope you keep the same standard in all your other pieces of work. There were a few minor mistakes in word choice, but it was all great. The cliff hanger has left me wanting more!

19:29, June 22, 2015 (UTC)