Talk:Doctor Who and The Lonely Assassins Part 2

A great story. The Weeping Angels and Dinosaurs were an awesome touch especially the Dinosaur coming out of the book. Some very interesting concepts explored but I really think you need to make these stories longer and expand some of the ideas. I really enjoy them as they are but extending them would be better.

I definitely prefer this from your first contributions to Doctor Who Adventures. You have improved as a writer very quickly and the cliffhanger at the end was legendary but I will not spoil it for anyone who us going to read it. Another fantastic story that leaves me wanting more and the cliff hanger makes me really excited for part 3. Two excellent parts so far here is to the rest of them. Turtlecake365 (talk) 20:16, February 15, 2014 (UTC)