Thread:Ashtonzilla/@comment-24825392-20171222233749/@comment-24825392-20171223151641

Congrats, Ashtonzilla!

I fixed the title so it abides by our policies, but other than that, it was great.

The plot is quite short and more like a synopsis, which is fine and synopsises are totally fine to do. However, if you want to improve upon it even more, and make it more thrilling reading, why not add a bit more detail and truly tell us Ashton Korban's perspective on the Time War.

For inspiration, take a look at Styracosaurus Rider's City of Light, which was a featured article a while back.

You don't have to, but I'd love to see more of your writing as you're obviously good at it.

I'll be here or in the discord if you need me.