Talk:Doctor Who Adventures/Organization of Destruction Part 2

Review:
Another awesome part! The cliffhanger is thrilling and makes me want more and the continuation of Alfie being the main character is working very well. The bit about who they love to go across the water does show that Alfie is in love with Alice, it is more than a crush at this point. Maxwell and Jimmy are very realistic in them being panicked and the merman was a nice addition to a very fast paced story!

Turtlecake365 (talk) 14:55, August 24, 2014 (UTC)