User blog:Turtle365/Monthly Blog (Turtlecake365) February

I have asked Rascalinc14 if I could do this and he agreed so here it is.

I have read many fanfictions this week and would like to do a quick review of some of them.

Story Reviews:
Planet 52 - 4 Parts: By MasterCharmander13:

An exciting 4 part story in which we see the return of Handles and the Cerebels. I enjoyed the ue of cliffhangers and love the new format going more into Classic Who. I did feel the return of Handles was more of a plot get out and would have liked his performance to be foreshadowed but still loved the new Handles.

The cliffhangers at the end of the stories left me wanting more and the return of the Cerebels and Cytrons were awesome and open up a lot more for the series as a whole. The whole story was well written and I am excited for what else MasterCharmander13 has in store for us. 8/10

The Lonely Assassins - 4 Parts: By Rascalinc14:

Will be reviewed when final part is finished.

New Doctor - 2 Parts: By POMfannumber1:

Only Part one is done but I will do a review of it. An enjoyable first episode of his new series it makes my excited for the next part. POMfannumber1 writing has really improved and it is evident by this piece of writing showing the Doctor's confusion about how to fly the TARDIS in a funny way and reintroducing Tasha Lem in a brilliant way.

The cliffhanger at the end makes me excited for the next part with the Orons being revealed. I am excited for more stories from POMfannumber1 after reading this fantastic story. My only criticism of it is that it was too short so can't really be ranked really highly. 7/10

Ahead Of The Curve - 1 Part: By Pinguinus:

A brilliant story from one of my favourite writers. The Doctor is portrayed brilliant and the whole thing feels perfectly paced. An enjoyably lighter story this was definitely fun to read. Handles being picked up in a bag was hilarious and the whole episode just continued from there continuing the mystery of the letters that were placed around during series 2 of Doctor Who Adventures.

Definitely one of my favourite stories on this Wiki but I did feel the story was just a bit too light but with cool aliens and a solid plot I will give this a 9/10.

Series Review:
I am going to review series one of Doctor Who Adventures created and led by MasterCharmander13.

I thought the first series is the weakest of Doctor Who Adventures but still enjoyable. Some of the stories did not feel as good as the second series was. MasterCharmander13 was at his worst at the start of the series and reading through this stories I can really see how much he has improved from his first efforts.

Without many solid stories which include my weak double parter for the series and many other weak stories series one was a disappointing start to what would become a brilliant series. The arc was a good idea that was not brilliantly executed and I may sound harsh but the first series was not the best by a long way. I can only give the first series 6/10 because of the list of disappointing stories including my own.

Favourite story:

The Time Lords Return - 2 Parts: By MasterCharmander13:

I really enjoyed the finale and felt without this I would probably not still be reading the series. A fantastic conclusion to a weak first series I would have to give this an 8.5/10.

Worst story:

The Doctor And The Plastic Brain - 2 Parts: By Rascalinc14:

This was one of Rascalinc14's first story and it really shows as it was not that good. The two parts linked because Michelle was in both of them and the story did not make that much sense and just felt rush. I almost put Twelfth Doctor two parter but decided to put this in instead.

His stories have really improved recently and I am excited to see more of Rascalinc14 but this story was just terrible, sorry. Most people on this wiki have done bad stories at first and really improved and this is the case of Rascalinc14. I can only rank this story 4/10.

Favourite Story:
This was released last month but because this is my first monthly blog I have decided to include it.

The Dragon of. St Romain - 1 Part: By Pinguinus:

His entry for my series Doctor Who: The Next Doctor ans what a story it was. Including a Time War plot and a brilliant one time companion this story was also the longest I have read on this Wiki so far and it still felt perfectly paced and the story was just pure perfection.

There was no explanation as to why the Doctor gave the cross to Romanus this was explained by Pinguinus later on as he had the strongest connection to the village. Despite this minor plot hole the story was brilliant and Jane and the Doctor were brilliantly portrayed. I will give this a 9.5/10 as it was so close to perfection but without the explanation and just that something else I cannot put my finger on it could not be a perfect 10.