User talk:Pinguinus/Vacation with Friends

A story which two writers (WFTD and Pinguinus wrote). WFTD wrote a fantastic start with brilliant build up and great potential for mystery, the characters were very well used and it was very funny as usual. Pinguinus did a huge second half of it, his solution to the skeletons in the water was brilliant and the Zambarau were brilliant and Mr. Bachelor an amazing character, with huour at many points and a brillinat take on some of the more serious tones of this episode Pinguinus really did well with helping WFTD to write this story.

An amazing story with brilliant build up and enough humour, twists and shocks to keep you entertained throughout, what an amazing story.

Turtlecake365 (talk) 20:40, May 3, 2014 (UTC)