User blog comment:Barry19/My Wiki Series Story's Preview!!! :D/@comment-27270572-20150222185855

This is an epic preview which promises so much. The pacing is brilliantly done with it not being too slow or too fast. Much better than your first attempts on the wiki! I hope this leads into a series possibly called 'Squad 9' as the characters all seem too good to be only used once. Cannot wait to see if they succeed and what will happen afterwards (that is why this should lead into a series).