Doctor Who Fanon:Critic's Lounge/Doctor Who Adventures/Slithering Beneath

This fanfic episode was quite enjoyable. Alfie's insistence on seeing the mole people was great, and the polluted sewer snakes were interesting. It's refreshing to see DW stories in which aliens aren't responsible for everything. :)

If I had to name one criticism, it would be the paragraphs. I prefer the paragraph structure seen in your earlier work in Skye is the Limit, in which quotes are separated into different paragraphs. However, this is merely a critique of the format, as I can find nothing to criticize in the story itself. :)

Doctor Who Adventures really benefits from having multiple writers on each season--it gives the episodes a lot of variety. Here's to many more episodes of this great series, not to mention more wonderful writing from WaitingfortheDoctor! :D

Pinguinus impennis 04:22, February 13, 2014 (UTC)