Talk:The Poisoned Water/@comment-3538016-20131229150411/@comment-24241659-20131229223435

A couple of little points I want to make.

1. Good creative criticism, Pinguinus.

2. Your stories are not garbage, Pinguinus. You should teach a creative writing class.

3. I think we have all made the point that this story needs to be worked on (perhaps try not using the all dialoge style, gives some people a head ache ex: me) We should lay off Rascalinc so they can fix it. We don't want to go scaring people off.

4. Rascalinc, I like that you strive for a dramatic story, I hope to see more of you. :)