User blog comment:Pinguinus/The Game of Rassilon (Competition)/@comment-24121492-20140115162342

Turtlecake Story:

Plot: 9

Originality: 10

Readability: 8,50

Characterization: 9

For the plot,It was a great one.The Soul Eaters were awesome.I can't actually explain why I liked it,but I did.It's an 9 here,because I felt something was missing,though I don't know what...

For Originality,you have 10.The Soul Eaters were awesome and very original.It was cool,and...I don't think I seen something alike in Doctor Who.So here,you get a 10 here.

For Readability,I'll have to give you an 8,50,just like I did to Waitingforthedoctor.As I have a different style of writing,I am more used with mine,and for me,it's harder reading in another style.I am sorry,but just an 8,50 here :(

For Characterization,you have 9.It was a good talkings between The Doctor and Clara.I like it,so I give you an big 9 here,as you deserve it.

If calculating all the notes I gave you,you have an 36,50 out of 40.You were almost to Max.It is a good rating in the end.Well,let's see what the others tell you.

Good Luck!