Thread:Turtle365/@comment-15395126-20151027125547/@comment-27270572-20151106201059

Sorry for not replying eariler, sometimes I get caught up in one thing and just completely miss other aspects off the wiki. As you can see I was reviewing a story but you should send another message if you think that I haven't seen the first one.


 * The dark tone of the episode in which the Doctor has to choose between Gallifrey and his companions could be brilliant if dealt with correctly. I think the idea of the Doctor sacrificing anything in order to get his home world back is brilliant and could play out through the series to perhaps hint/ foreshadow the events that will come later in the season


 * Overarching plots are one of my favourite parts of the show and to see some parts of several episodes coming together would be awesome. I do however feel the is the Doctor a hero or someone we should fear question may be considered to similar to 'am I a good man' arc that occured in series 8.


 * Unsure about the mysterious girl idea as you said it will be hard to make it plot relevant and why would she try and help or hinder him? It does sound like something Missy would do so that could always be an idea.


 * The romantic relation with another Time Lord could be interesting if done correctly but I don't think it would go down well by revealing the Doctor in fact was going out with himself, and how would her dying remove the chance from regenerating into her in the future?


 * The Doctor meeting Christ sounds like a brilliant idea although I would advise that you try not to be overly controversial with the science v religion. Personally I am not religious but it could cause offense to those who are if you start doing debates against their religion so try to be careful.


 * The two titles are just as brilliant as the first one, I think if one of those taglines can only apply to series 12 or 13 then use it for that.

Sorry for seeming a bit more critical of some of your ideas just want to help you advance the series along and try to help out in anyway I can. The series has really changed since your original ideas, a highly positive thing and definitely shows that you taking time with this series is looking to pay off, but time will tell but I am sure it will be brilliant!