User blog comment:Pinguinus/The Game of Rassilon (Competition)/@comment-27270572-20140115194951

I will first vote MC13's story Time Blast.

Plot: The plot was smart with the Cytron's wanting to invade Earth after getting exiled. It was never fully explained why they wanted to kill the Human's but with the Doctor and 11 it felt great. I will rate it an 8.

Originality: I felt the Cytron's were very interesting and there attempt to take Earth from eile interesting. They remind me a bit of the Silurians, been on Earth for a long time and then trying to take it back, That is why I can only give the originality an 7.

Readability: Not my usual style and the plot suffered because of it. Not much was fully explained and if you had added description then it would have been easier to read. I did manage to follow the plot just about so I will give readability a 5.

Characterization: I enjoyed the Doctor's competitive nature announcing that he had been observing the Cytron's for a longer time. I felt the 11th Doctor had week dialogue and so did Clara but enjoyed the Doctor's interactions with Kate Stewart. I will give the characterization an 8.

So overall a solid story that suffered because of the script style and the villains being a bit like the Silurians.