Talk:Volvuna's World

Neat! I like this. :) The Time War element is interesting, and I'm curious to see how this universe's history unfolds. The Controllers in particular sound cool. :)

I'd just like to make two comments: Keep up the good work!
 * Damnaer is the name of a Time Agent. It is his name, not a title, so he doesn't have to be referred to as "the" Damnaer. I removed the word from in front of his name.
 * Also, there's unnecessary text formatting on the article. Can I remove it?

Pinguinus impennis 22:21, May 9, 2014 (UTC)