Talk:Doctor Who Adventures/Sky Vermin

Review: A Day Out In Stevenage:
The character dialogue was a very enjoyable point in this story with some very funny remarks between characters. The idea of the birds actually being far smarter than we thought is a great idea and them attacking people is also a fantastic inclusion. The ending is very good with the hint that this whole saga may not actually be finished off. You chose Holby City because of the TV show I am guessing, very cool reference!

The story is a bit quick paced and some of the other parts should at least be hinted at like the water instead of it all rushing by, make the story a bit longer to include more plot and develop characters more like Ben.

A very entertaining story with a great concept and very good character develop that may be a bit rushed but it was overall a good episode of DWA and I hope to see more of your stories on the wiki in the future, the concept was brilliant.

Turtlecake365 (talk) 18:41, June 15, 2015 (UTC)