Talk:Doctor Who Adventures/The Island of Paradox Part 4

A great ending. Them getting dragged into a dragon world could have been played out more and it would have been interesting if they had actually got pulled into the dragon world. Shalek was brilliant and the inclusion of Handles at the end was very interesting.

One of your best stories and you kept the momentum up throughout the four parts which was brilliant to see. Alfie and Alice are being used more effectively with every story and it is nice to see. Good pacing except from them getting pulled into another world but still and absolutely brilliant story.

Turtlecake365 (talk) 10:43, March 2, 2014 (UTC)