Talk:Doctor Who: The Next Doctor/Return of the Daleks- Part 2: Psycho and the Daleks

Turtlecake asked me to review his first ever story on the wiki, so here I am.

I must say, this is not nearly as good as Turtlecake's more recent works. The episodes are shorter, the plots are simpler, and the grammar and formatting make them very hard to read.

That said, the episodes were not unenjoyable, and hints of Turtlecake's current writing style shine through. Psycho is an interesting antagonist, and it's interesting to see him in an early story. These are good markers both to launch The Next Doctor as a series and to show how much Turtlecake has improved as a writer. Pinguinus impennis 22:01, March 15, 2014 (UTC)