User blog comment:Pinguinus/The Game of Rassilon (Competition)/@comment-5853086-20140115171812

Pinginus Story:

Plot:1

Originalty:8

Readabilty:5

Characterization: 6

Plot: I have to give you 1 seeing as you never actually wrote it.

Originalty: I think it was a good idea to feature The Time War.

Readablity: What you wrote wasn't exactly clear.

Characterization: You really got into the hearts of The Doctor.

Overall: 7/10. Wasn't the best but still good.