Thread:Turtle365/@comment-27270572-20140203200811

This is the 2nd episode of my series. The Doctor is going to Telethon but he finds an unexpected enemy there. Can he save everyone or will he fail in his role as the Doctor?

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This is the 2nd episode of my series. The Doctor is going to Telethon but he finds an unexpected enemy there. Can he save everyone or will he fail in his role as the Doctor? 