Thread:Turtle365/@comment-15395126-20151027125547/@comment-15395126-20151028034040

That's good advice; thanks. I use a program called Celtx when making my scripts. It auto-formats everything professionally and correctly.

There really isn't a villain in this episode. The Doctor might face a threat or two (a lion tries to kill him in a gladiator match in Ancient Rome), but there is no concrete threat.

As for the Doctor's personality, it's just hard for me not to make him like other Doctors. I find that while I'm trying to give Jason Isaacs his own voice and personality, I'm writing for Peter Capaldi, almost subconsciously. I keep writing lines of dialogue and thinking, "The Thirteenth Doctor wouldn't say that with the personality I've given him…".

I'm confused what you mean by, "…the reason for him explaining should have some sort of relevance to either the story or a future arc" when speaking of the mysterious girl who'd appear in the TARDIS at the end of the episode...