Talk:The Trio of Time

Chapter 4 review:
Amazing. I was shocked and my heart pounding just like Theta's. The tension was brilliant and the wait was worth it with a brilliant cliffhanger to keep me going until chapter 5.

The plot was brilliant with Koshei being brilliantly portrayed with his evilness and this has to be my favourite chapter yet with brilliant tension and the pacing was perfect throughout. Please do these more regularly as chapter 4 has been a huge joy to read. Turtlecake365 (talk) 20:30, February 24, 2014 (UTC)