User blog comment:Pinguinus/The Game of Rassilon (Competition)/@comment-5853086-20140115173832

MasterCharmander13 Story:

Plot: 10.

Originatly: 3.

Readablity: 9

Characterization: 5.

Plot: It was a great plot!

Originatly: Because The Cytrons were in it and you have already written about them.

Readablity: Because you write in the same style as me.

Charaterzation: Not so good.

Overall: 10/10!!!!!!!!!!