Talk:The Poisoned Water/@comment-3538016-20131229150411/@comment-2001921-20131229165430

I'm terrible at giving creative writing criticism, it's not easy for me at all. That's why I barely ever do it, and I will always get the tone wrong- too dismissive, or too gentle, or something so I worry about how feedback would be received. It's much easier with scientific criticism because it's either right or wrong and you can just explain how the thing works, but in the world of words it's so subjective and full of opinions.

But I want to say I agree with everything you've said here, and that any change in place or status should be accompanied by at least one paragraph of description :P