User blog comment:Pinguinus/Powers That Be / Into the Vortex Trailer/@comment-24121492-20140630193312

It's good.But this bit..I'll copy paste it:

''A medieval knight stumbles into a dimly lit stone room. He is alone, with but a single window at one end of the room.''

Voice: "You must have come very far, good sir knight. Would you care for a glass of Cypriot wine? I took it from the 1372 harvest--one of the best."

''The knight climbs to his feet, looking disoriented. He feels his way to a wall, where there are engravings of five men and women."''

Voice: "Welcome to the Tower of Rassilon. Well... that isn't its name anymore. It ceased to be called that ages ago. For a great while, it was called the Tower of the Five Heroes, for foolish and sentimental reasons."

The knight feels the face of an engraving.

The face is his own.

Voice: "I'm afraid none of the 'five heroes' are alive anymore. Nowadays, it is called the Tower of Skouros."

That part..is too much of a discussion.Did you noticed,how in my trailers,there's one narrative line,followed by 1-2 line,and then repeat.You didn't had a narrator,and had way too much lines in it.

Of course,you can do it in your own style.The only reason I said this was because you said I'm doing awesome trailers,and you want me to feedback yours.