Talk:New Adventures of Doctor Who/The masters return from galifrey

Review: Men' Clothing? Nah:
With this acting as a prequel to Dark Water is may be a bit harder to review. I liked the regeneration and the death of the guards being a particularly cool aspect. Perhaps add dialogue, look at others stories on the wiki for examples, I did this and it has far improved me as a writer. It was great to see your take on events and it would be very cool if the show actually played out in the same or similar fashion.

Try to make scenes and add dialogue but this is a good first effort onto the wiki and it is great to see how imaginitive you are, you have a lot of potential.

Turtlecake365 (talk) 11:50, July 16, 2015 (UTC)