Talk:Doctor Who Adventures/The Cylocks

Review -- Segment 1: The Cylocks Before Time:
The first segment introduced a brilliant idea, what if something existed that came from before our universe. The time missiles are also a fantastic idea which I hope will be used in future stories. The story was quite fast paced and I felt the Doctor overreacted to everything. Slow down your stories and get your ideas better represented onto the page.

Turtlecake365 (talk) 16:58, August 1, 2015 (UTC)