Talk:Mind Swap

10 second resolution:
Well...For a first story it's certainly not bad, but looking at it from a unbiased perspective....It's rushed. Especially the ending. They got mind swaped and then 10 seconds later they were un-mind swapped.

This had potential to be explored(with them being mind-swapped and all), but when the story would normally reach it's midpoint and most interesting point...it just....ends in 10 seconds.

As for the actress, I dunno who Dani is but I do know Dove so.....Yea that's about it.

 Master Charmander   13  19:15, February 1, 2016 (UTC)