Talk:Doctor Who Series/Gallifrey Stands

An awesome start to the finale! The beginning is interesting, and draws the reader's interest in pretty quickly. Maria's backstory is cool but tragic, and her asking "Who is the Master" suddenly caught me completely off-guard, just like the Doctor. :D

The ending is cool, and I can't wait to see the second part.

One note: a sequence of events is repeated several times.

“Why did we stop?” Clara asked.

“I am not sure,” the Doctor said “but we have been brought to a crack away from the rest of the universe, a  Clara said.

''“Okay then sweetie,” Tom said to Clara. “I will still carry a knife though,” Tom smiled to the Doctor who smiled back as suddenly the TARDIS stopped but it did not land''

The above excerpt is repeated several times. Is this a formatting error, or a hint that the TARDIS is trapped in some kind of time loop? Pinguinus impennis 22:30, February 15, 2014 (UTC)