Talk:Doctor Who Adventures/Mary... Mary

Review: Sun Ray Gun:
The level of detail was brilliant and really enhanced the story. It was brilliant to know all the details about the various surroundings. The build up was brilliant but the ending felt a bit rushed but was perfectly logical. The Doctor was brilliant in this episode and I hope Mary comes back as she needs a bit more character development. I enjoyed the Spooner (I think that is what it is called) and it sounds like a great monster with a possibility of return. Mary ... Mary 2 being hinted at?

Shalek was giving a brilliant role in his sword skills saving Alice's life and the group had some great banter between them and worked off each other very well. A critisicm is the structure which makes it harder to read and makes for a story that does not flow so well but this is only a minor critisicm. The story was brilliant and very engaging with great pacing throughout except at the end and a fantastic plot line. This was even better than The Wall and it proves your talent as a writer. Definitely up there with the very best of DWA. Fantastic episode!

Turtlecake365 (talk) 11:45, July 21, 2015 (UTC)