Talk:Doctor Who: Last of the Time Lords/First Days

Full Review:
An exciting adventure with the end of the world .. well Dinosauria ... okay not the world just the Dinosaurs. Katherine her brilliantly funny self and the Doctor as the overly smart genius! The Vastra cameo was pretty awesome.

Maybe a slight critisicm over your last two stories is that the conclusions are rushed. The first story KatD was a masterpiece in how to write a story and maybe making your stories to that length would make them seem less rushed.

Still an excellent series and this story was very good. I wonder if the Dinosaurs London, Ireland and the Megalodan USA have any connection to the countries of the same name. Really would like this addressed in a later story. The story arc seems to be about the Master, I think he told the Dinosaurs about the Doctor but then again I could be entirely wrong. Just hoping for his return after an absolutely brilliant first appearance!

Also just wanted to ask if you could write in Galaxies Guardians first season to replace Pinguinus who is unable to do his episode? It would be awesome to have someone of your quality on board the series. Please reply soon and also make more stories!

Turtlecake365 (talk) 19:57, February 4, 2015 (UTC)