User:Turtle365

I am a rollback now. Rollback are cool!

Monthly blog: This is where I review stories and series from the past month on the Wiki.

Doctor Who Series:
I CANNOT WRITE FOR ANY MORE SERIES UNTIL I AM LESS BUSY SO PLEASE DON'T ASK.

Series I run:
Doctor Who: The Next Doctor

Starting with a fictional 12th Doctor newly regenerated with companion Charlie. This series will go through the next Doctor and his adventures.

Doctor Who Series

Starting straight after The Time Of The Doctor this series will all be written by me. Clara will be the companion for the 1st series with a new companion called Tom who will come part way through the series.

Series I am co creating:
Doctor Who: The Wiki Series

A whole Wiki Series for Doctor Who Fanon this series will be a joint effort by the whole series as we go through the Doctor's from 1st to his current incarnation.

Episode title:

Oath Of Silence

It will feature a new race called Voicerobbers and it is set at the Isces Temple where a legendary group of Monks are in danger.

The Origins Of K9

After meeting the 4th doctor and k9, a girl is inspired to create her own K9. She travels though time and space with him.

This series has not yet started.

The Common Series: A New Age

A series based on The Common Series Project it will be run by me, Finn Tracy and POMfannumber1. It will feature the twelth Doctor and Clara for the 1st series.

We will all write the 1st episode and then we will write four episodes each for every series.

Contributing writer:
Series title:

Skye is the Limit

About a girl called Skye Davis who meets the Doctor one day. She then goes on many adventures with him but things are more complicated than they look.

Episode title: Series 1:

Scared Passages

Skye wants a scary adventure and the Doctor has taken her to the house from which nobody returns, can they change that or will the house keep its title?

Series title:

Twelfth Doctor Adventures

The 12th Doctor's adventures with Helen through many journeys and adventures.

Episode titles: Series 1:

Jewels Of The Cybermen (part 1)

Destruction Of The Cybermen (part 2)

A two part Cyberman episode. The Doctor and Helen are investigating a village where people have gone missing. They will find a silver nemisis learking around, ready to produce one last delete.

Series title:

Doctor Who Adventures

The 12th Doctor with Clara for the 1st series travelling through time and space. Then for the second series Handles and Alfie will be the new companions and they will be travelling with the 12th Doctor.

Episode titles: Series 1:

The Underground Species (part 1)

Revenge Of The Ood (part 2)

A two parter. The Doctor and Clara land in a middle of a war. The Silurians and Ood are fighting the Humans of one small town which could release the path for the whole world. There will be twists and turns and Kyle will join. The Ood are getting red eye again and the Silurians will not be able to control them, who will win the war?

Series 2:

The Last Story

The Doctor, Alfie and Handles go to a haunted house to investigate sighting of ghosts. What they find is far worse as people are losing their life stories. The Soul Eaters will eat everything that enters the house and the Doctor is going in.

Series 3:

There will be 4 parts for this series. The old format will come back but no details of the episode have been decided except that it will be set in Victorian London.

Series title:

Eighth Doctor Adventures

A series based around the adventures of the 8th Doctor and new companion Vex.

Episode title: Series 1:

The Daleks Revenge

Not yet made. The Doctor will face the Daleks again but this time they have a different plan. The Daleks will try to take over the world using physical holograms and they will take over governments. Can the Doctor stop them on time or will the Daleks finally get revenge?

Series title:

Doctor Who Returns!

Baed around the 12th Doctor and companions Katy and Maria as they have adventures from all around the universe.

Episode title: Series 3:

Title and enemy are unknown for now.

I will also be producing for the Doctor Who Returns series:

Series title:

The Great Detectives

Based around the Paternoster Gang and their adventures,

Episode titles: Series 1 part 1:

Punishment Of The Sontaran

The Sontarans have returned and Strax has to face his punishment but he won't do it without a fight.

Series 1 part 2:

Daleks In Time

Unlikely to be finished due to the probability that the series has been cancelled. The Daleks are going back in time to Victorian London to cause a paradox that will rip up the universe. The Doctor is returning to try to save the day with the Paternoster Gang.

Series title:

Paternoster Gang Adventures

A series based around the Paternoster Gang as a mystery fighter is fighting them. But will they find out who it is?

Episode title: Series 1:

The Twin Mystery

Twins are going missing after about a year, It is happening all over London but can Vastra solve of the missing twins. The shape shifters are taking over.

Series title:

The Paternoster Adventures

About the Paternoster Gang and their adventures.

I will be the producer for the series.

Episode title: Series 1:

There is no information about the episode yet except that it will be based in Victorian London.

Series title:

Doctor Who: The Fall Of The Seven

Not sure what it is about.

I will be the producer for the series.

Episode titles:

I will write a two parter for the series. There have been no details decided yet.

Series title:

Doctor Who:The War Doctor Series

About the War Doctor and the Time war this series will express what was happening during the Time war.

Episode titles: Series 1:

Stuck on a Ship (Part 1)

The Beast Inside (Part 2)

It will feature the Red Virus in the two parter.

Series title:

Doctor Who:The Quest Of The 13th

It will be based on a fictional 13th Doctor with Clara as the companion.

Episode titles: Series 1:

Shadows Of The Night (Part 1)

Death In Darkness (Part 2)

This is a two parter. It will feature the Vashta Nerada but no other details have been decided.

Series title:

The Clara Oswald Adventures

Set after the Sarah Jane adventures, Sarah Jane is dead and Clara will take over.

Episode title: Series 2:

No information has been decided.

Conclusion:

I seem to be writing for a lot of series. In particular for the fictional 12th Doctor and also for the Paternoster Gang. There are 15 series that I am writing for or running or co creating at the moment.

How often will I wrote stories?
I am writing for a load of series but will try to write a couple of episodes a week but my real life schedule is going crazy.

How do I tell my story or idea?
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Character use
Anyone can use my characters or planets but you must send me a link to the story that you have used them in. That is the only thing you have to do but anyone can use them. If I become inactive you can freely use my characters but still send me a link in case I check it later.

Doctor Who Series/Twelfth Night

 * I love this ep! I really enjoyed the end bit with 11. I thought the Malakan was quite a great monster, Hope too see them again soon! I am buzzing for this series!

10000000/10 :)

By Rascalinc14 By Turtlecake365 By MasterCharmander13 By Turtlecake365
 * Thank you for liking this episode, I hope you enjoy the rest of this series!
 * Awesome.Loved the Doctor's confusion,and the bit with 11 and 12 was great at the end.It was all great,and btw,I like this style over your old one ;)
 * Thanks and it was Pinguinus who influenced the decision. I prefer it too.
 * It looks wonderful with the new paragraph format! :D

Also, I'll say again that I love this story. Cool aliens--will you ever feature the Purgeon in an episode of its own?

By Pinguinus By Turtlecake365 By Pinguinus By Turtlecake365
 * Thanks for the feedback, the Purgeon may appear in series 2.
 * That would be cool. :)
 * Thanks for all the feedback Pinguinus, you have really helped.
 * Nice!  I like the Malakan, and Strax was awesome as always. A good episode all together!

My only criticism would be the quote formatting. It's hard to read when they're all packed into the same paragraphs, and technically, it is grammatically incorrect.

By Pinguinus By Turtlecake365 By Pinguinus By Turtlecake365 By Pinguinus By Turtlecake365
 * Thanks for the feedback, glad you enjoyed it despite your difficulty to read in my style. I find it much harder to write like you suggest and find it eaier in paragraphs.
 * Fine. But could you work on punctuation, too? Commas or periods at the end of quotes are also important factors in readability.
 * Thanks for all of the help. Am I supposed to put the commas in before the quote ends? And do I also put commas after questions?
 * I  believe question marks replace commas. Commas are placed on the inside of quotation marks.
 * I got it right then. I will do this style for future stories.

Doctor Who Series/Night Of The Angels
By MasterCharmander13 By Turtlecake365 By Rascalinc14 By Turtlecake365
 * Great episode!But I was quite confused....why did the Doctor deleted the only survivor's body?
 * The survivor was dead, he deleted the body because it was dead.
 * Great! I did like episode 1 better but maybe because they had Malakan!
 * I thought the Weeping Angels would be better but if you preferred the Malakan that is fine. I hope that you enjoyed it.
 * Great story! I'll say again that the new paragraph structure makes your stories much easier to read, especially with a complicated plot like this. :)

I liked the Archie subplot, and the creativity in making the Weeping Angels essentially weapons by strategic blinking. The Angels were portrayed quite well, combining the best qualities from several of their appearances. The force field made of time energy was a nice touch.

My only question is, why do the people of Telethon have human names like Archie or Ryan? Was it just to make them easier to remember, or is there an in-universe reason as well?

By Pinguinus By Turtlecake365
 * Just to make them easier to remember, thanks for reading the story and liking it. I will try to make some more unusual names in the future.
 * It's fine, I was just wondering. Doctor Who has seen far more implausible events and details in its history. :P

Again, a great episode. I can't wait to read more from this series, and it makes me excited to write my own Weeping Angel story in the future.

BTW, are you going to write The Next Doctor still, or has that series been discontinued in favor of this? By Pinguinus By Turtlecake365
 * I am still writing for The Next Doctor but the writers are a bit slow so I decided to do a series that is only written by me.

Doctor Who Series/The Lost Army

 * Nice episode! I like the Orons as antagonists, and Becker's a cool character. The fact that the whole affair started with a cake makes me smile. :)

What is Becker's rank, btw?

By Pinguinus By Turtlecake365
 * Well he is a high ranking soldier but not top. Maybe Colonel. Thanks for commenting.

Doctor Who Series/Fake Soldiers

 * Excellent episode! The pace was faster and more shocking than its predecessor, and the conclusion was awesome. I loved the Orons turning into snow and air--not an idea often explored with shape shifters!

Comparing a German soldier in WWII with the Doctor during the Time War was brilliant, and shines perspective on both wars. Having Becker as a sympathetic character was awesome, as it can be far too easy to fall into the mistake of thinking that an evil country equates to evil men.

I loved the revelations concerning Orlov and the animals. It was both surprising and done in an interesting way.

All things considered, I like this part better than its immediate predecessor, and its probably my new favorite in the Doctor Who Series. Keep up the good work! :D

By Pinguinus By POMfannumber1 By Turtlecake365
 * I created the Orons. You can use them for The Knight Of Time if you want.
 * Thanks for the feedback Pinguinus it is really appreciated but for the idea of the Orons the credit has to go to POM as he created them.

Doctor Who Series/Killer Plastic

 * Nice episode! There seems to be more descriptive text accompanying the dialogue than in your previous episodes. This makes the stories feel more real. :)

The presence of Autons without a Nestene is quite alarming, and I look forward to reading the answer to this mystery.

By Pinguinus By Turtlecake365
 * Thanks for the feedback! I hope you enjoy the next episode as well. The mystery of who will be explained later.

Doctor Who Series/Life Story

 * Awesomely creepy story. The first bit in particular freaked me out. :)

The cliffhanger was also creepy, and really makes me want to read the next episode.

By Pinguinus By Pinguinus By Turtlecake365
 * Btw, will you ever create a page for the Soul Eaters? I think that it would be helpful to have a page of information about them, with a list of appearances.
 * I will try to make a page, not much information will be provided though. I am glad that you liked it and this is how I wanted them to be, I failed to do this with my story for them so gave them more time to be creepy.