User blog comment:Pinguinus/The Game of Rassilon (Competition)/@comment-3538016-20140116011519/@comment-27270572-20140116163641

I mentioned that MC13 in the description that it was for your series. @Pinguinus, I would like to improve my writing so could you tell me what punctuation mistakes have been made. I am not sure about the paragraph thing, I could give it a go with your style.