User blog comment:Pinguinus/The Game of Rassilon (Competition)/@comment-24121492-20140115154223

Waitingforthedoctor Story:

Plot:9,50

Originality: 9

Readability: 9

Characterization: 10

For the plot,it was good.I like switching bodies stories,though it could had been longer.I felt they solved the problem too fast.That made you lost 0,50 ,tough it's not that such a big deal

For Originality,I liked your story,it was awesome.But Switching-Bodies is something very used.I am not saying the story wasn't good(it was awesome actually),but I just say it's not THAT Original.But hey,it's just an 9.It's still a good note.

For Readability,It's only an 9,because,as I have a different style of writing,I am more used with mine,and for me,it's harder reading in another style.Though 9 is still a big note,so I don't think it will affect your final score too much.

For Characterization:Well that is something I really liked.Unlike me,who usually jumps in the action,and doesn't leaves too much room for talking,you do the opposite.And that is a good thing.I would like myself be able to do that,but I am an action guy,and usually jumps in the action.I liked the talking between them.It was great.So on this side,you get a 10 from me.

Good Luck!