User blog comment:Pinguinus/The Game of Rassilon (Competition)/@comment-3538016-20140116011519

And now for the last story I'll be rating--coincidentally, Turtlecake's The Last Story. Huh.

Plot: A good, solid plot involving a haunted house and a frightening alien. I enjoyed my reading of it. :) I'll give plot a 9.

Originality: Aww, Stormogeddon's all grown up! Handles is back! And there are aliens that attack not your body, nor your mind, but your life story. I give this a 10'!

Readability: While the story was written well, there were multiple errors in punctuation and paragraph structure that made parts of the story difficult to understand. I give this aspect a 4.

Characterization: I feel that the characters could have been used to greater potential, but this aspect is still good and solid. 6

'''A good story, which excites my interest in seeing future episodes of Turtlecake's series. A total of 29 points.'''