Thread:Pinguinus/@comment-27270572-20140205190204/@comment-27270572-20140213210550

Hi, Pinguinus. Could you please review my new story? I have just been writing non stop for about two hours to complete it so please review:

http://whoniversefanon.wikia.com/wiki/Doctor_Who_Series/The_Noon_Of_Time

The tenth episode of the series. The Doctor has brought Clara and Tom to a hotel. A Billax asks them for help but could it end up being the collapse of the universe?