User blog comment:Pinguinus/The Game of Rassilon (Competition)/@comment-3538016-20140115185328

And now I will vote on Julia's Change my Mind.

Plot: I like the plot here, short as the story may be. Skye goes wandering off in the TARDIS (always a cause for trouble), and runs across an alien. Hilarity ensues. :) I'll give this an 8.

Originality: Body-swapping has been done countless times in various media, including once on Doctor Who. However, I haven't seen it often in fanfiction, and it's done in an entertaining way. I'll give Originality a 5 here.

Readability: Proper grammar, syntax, etc, all in a style I'm used to seeing. It wouldn't hurt to get rid of some of the formatting, however, as the Google Docs font is cramped and distracting. I personally volunteer to help with this. :) Rating: 7.

Characterization: I love this aspect of the Skye is the Limit stories. WaitingfortheDoctor is an empathetic person, and this definitely comes through in her writing. Perfect 10!

'Not my favorite of the Skye is the Limit'' stories, but definitely a fun, interesting read. A total of 30 points.'''