Talk:Doctor Who: The Next Doctor/Choice of Death- Part 3: Injustice of the Judoon

Triple Review
I am reviewing this and the previous episodes in this storyline.

First of all, I'm very glad you've changed your paragraph structure since this. The way they're structured here is quite difficult to read.

The plot is weak compared to your more recent works. The rate at which you're improving is extremely noticeable. Psycho's reveal didn't carry the impact I'm sure was intended.

That is not to say that this is a bad piece of writing--merely that you have certainly improved since this. Psycho was an interesting villain, and the Judoon were used fairly well.

Overall, it is definitely not one of your best works, but elements of your style and future skill are plainly visible. If you keep getting better at this pace, you'll outshine everyone on the wiki in a few months. :)

Pinguinus impennis 18:49, May 17, 2014 (UTC)