- 0 I CAN'T... I won't spoil!! The best cliffhanger ever!! I liked the notes and things and can't wait for the dragons to re appear!!! I hope he is not!!!
--Rascalinc14 (talk) 13:14, March 1, 2014 (UTC)
Another brilliant episodes. You are coming up with better and better ideas and this story was absolutely fantastic. The cliffhanger would have been better without the bit of dialogue that Shalek said at the end but it leaves me wondering how he will escape. The dragons were awesome and I hope they come back.
So part 2 continued the brilliant story and this could be one of your best ever stories if you continue at the quality you are going at. The idea of Alfie and Alice following the Doctor's tracks and seeing two stories in one is a fascinating concept. Can't wait until the next part and continue with this quality of story.
Turtlecake365 (talk) 13:32, March 1, 2014 (UTC)
Thanks.When I will finish it,I will request this for March featured story.
MasterCharmander 13 13:44, March 1, 2014 (UTC)
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Brilliant second part to the story! This episode is turning out to become really great. I really want to know more about what happened to The Doctor. I do wonder why The Doctor might say that without the emotion he normally gives so I suggest you just add a bit more emoticon.
name (Talk) 15:13, June 14, 2014 (UTC)
Keep in mind that this is my fan-made 13th Doctor,Matty.Not all the Doctors act the same.
MasterCharmander 13 15:26, July 28, 2014 (UTC)